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Name: Luna
Hair: Silver
Eyes: Black
Character traits: Black cat ears and a bunny tail
Personality: Cheerful, and caring

Start Story* *Luna's dream*

"MOM! PLEASE COME BACK!" *Clap**Slap* "KYAAAAAAHHHHH" *End Dream*
"My eyes shot open, I had broken out in a cold sweat, and my heart was pounding. Its been 6 years since that day, the day i tried to bring back my mother. I had used my cat and my bunny as equivent exchange, but they were'nt enough, because when i woke up i had cat ears and a bunny tail. I was 6 years old then and tomorrow is my 13th birthday." "I got out of bed and put on my usual outfit, a pink tubetop and to hide my tail a black loose fitting skirt, and to hide my ears i put on the bandana that my dad gave me. I went down stairs to see my dad waiting for me at the door. "Morning Lu.""Morning Daddy." I said. Even though i was a chimera now he still loved me. " you ready Lu?""YEP!" On our way to HQ I found and injured kitty. "Daddy the poor kitty is hurt can we help it?" I asked. "Sure Lu." I ran over and picked up the injured kitty and ran back to daddie's side. We got to Central HQ and I was instantly greeted with a hand on my head, the same one i was always greeted with. "Havoc...if you dont remove your hand I'll-- "You'll What?" " I'll bite you!" I said with a slight hiss, Havoc was like my big brother, he was always there when i needed him. I got the usual hug from Hawkeye and everyone else. "Umm Hawkeye?" "Yes miss Luna?" "COuld you get me some bandages?" "What for?" "Well I found an injured cat and her leg seems to be hurt." "Of course miss Luna." "AWWWWWW look at our  little chimera reaching out to an injured kitten." Havoc said. "Havoc...tomorrow you wont be able to call me little anymore." I said. "And why is that?"
"Havoc did you forget tomorrow is her birthday?" "Wow Roy...your daughter sure has grown up alot." said Havoc "She sure has." "Daddy?" I said "Yes Lu what is it?" "Since I will be 13 tomorrow I wanna become a State Alchemist."
this is the un edited version of chapter one i could use some ideas for chapter 5
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colorguardgurl42 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
Cute ^///^

And sorta like mine with Havoc and Roy lol
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vocalnoidbeauty101 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
thanks i will have chapter 2 up soon possably tonight
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:iconcolorguardgurl42:
colorguardgurl42 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010
sounds good!
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:iconvocalnoidbeauty101:
vocalnoidbeauty101 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
thanks i need some help with chapter five
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:iconcolorguardgurl42:
colorguardgurl42 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
What can I do to help? Just name it ^^
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vocalnoidbeauty101 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
i get writers block easily i will send you chapter 4 soon once i finish it and i really need some ideas
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:iconcolorguardgurl42:
colorguardgurl42 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
I've had super writer's block since I finished Living a Life. I'll try to think of some good ideas
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:iconvocalnoidbeauty101:
vocalnoidbeauty101 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
Kay thankies
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cocomooluvr Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
...Your dad's Mustang?
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...Cool.
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vocalnoidbeauty101 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
i know right
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